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Saturday 1 August 2015

Never Give Your Phone To Young Kids!

WALHT-use ethos, pathos and logos to persuade my readers.

BAN KIDS WITH PHONES! Young kids that are 1-13 with phones can create a disaster to the family or the community. They can call random people and check things that are not very appropriate for their age.


All the bad things on the phone will be exposed. Kids can call the emergency number and the vehicles will be rushing down to your house. You can create a big mess in the road if you talk about a real emergency when nothing is happening. You will need to pay a fine that is very expensive. Don't give your phone to your young ones!


Young kids can fiddle with your phone and lose them. They might be playing with your phone outside and drop them on the solid concrete. Your screen will break and you might need to buy another phone again. You phone might have costed hundreds of dollars. Kids might click on ads that pop up. The ads may look good but once the screen loads all the inappropriate stuff in the internet goes rushing down. They can watch and look at things that aren't for their age. Kids might get cyber bullied and might lead to anger or suicide.

Never give you phone to your younger sibling.

1 comments:

Dorothy Burt said...

Hi Kevin, I have enjoyed reading your persuasive piece against phones. It made me wonder at what age YOU hope to get a phone? And do you think there is any valid reason for a young person to have a phone of their own?

Mrs Burt

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