Try To Be Like This Man!

BEST ADVERTISEMENT EVER

This ad was awarded for the best advertisement for 2014.

The author has presented to me emotionally about giving to people who have nothing. He/She has started the ad with a caring choice of a man that placed a dead plant onto some pouring water. The author has used a mother and a daughter living in the streets, and a man comes up to donate money to the girl. This catches the audience's attention because people will think the man is so compassionate and generous. At the end everyone changed. All the people who the man helped is now happy.

The author has cleverly repeated the same actions the man did to see the change of the people who he helped. The writer has written that the dog is an abandoned dog and the man came to help the dog to eat. At the end the dog was a loyal pet to the man. The author has made the man help all the people who needs help. This gets the audience attention that there are people who have a lot and should give to the poor.

WORLDS BEST AD FOR 2014!

The Best Advertisement Ever 2014

Persuasive strategy	Yes / No	How the author used it?
Claim – States the main   point or stance	Yes	The author has presented to me emotionally about giving to people who have nothing. He/She has started the ad with a caring choice of a man that placed a dead plant onto some pouring water.
Big Names –  Mentions experts and important people to support the argument	No
Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility	Yes	The author has used a mother and a daughter living in the streets, and a man comes up to donate money to the girl. This catches the audience's attention because people will think the man is so compassionate and generous. At the end everyone changed. All the people who the man helped is now happy.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions	Yes	The author has cleverly repeated the same actions the man did to see the change of the people who he helped.
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  facts to support the argument	Yes	The writer has written that the dog is an abandoned dog and the man came to help the dog to eat. At the end the dog was a loyal pet to the man.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  for the cause	Yes	The author has made the man help all the people who needs help. This gets the audience attention that there are people who have a lot and should give to the poor.
Research – Uses studies and   information to make the   argument seem more convincing;  this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations.	No	The author gave his/or own perspective about giving or helping.

Delicious Eggs!

L.I. We are learning how to catch our audience's attention by using ethos, pathos and logos.

Persuasive strategy	Yes / No	How the author used it?
Claim – States the main   point or stance	Yes	The writer very cleverly uses the phrase “DON'T GET CAUGHT!” To open the advertisement and repeated throughout the ad.
Big Names –  Mentions experts and important people to support the argument	Yes	This ad has the name Cadbury which is a New Zealand company that is world famous for its production of quality tasting chocolate.
Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility	Yes	The author uses the word “Angel” to the little girl, to catch the audience attention because people will think she's innocent.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions	Yes	The writer has described to me about what's inside the egg and how irresistible Cadbury Creme Eggs are.
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or  facts to support the argument	Yes	The writer has written that the little girl(Angel) has a secret love, which people will think who and what is her love.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency  for the cause	Yes	The author has spoken to the audience that the eggs will ultimately kill you away, which means you will love it.
Research – Uses studies and   information to make the   argument seem more convincing;  this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations.	No	No research

Don't Abandon Your Pet!

Adopting A Pet!

WALHT-use ethos,pathos and logos to persuade my audience.

Persuasive strategy	Yes / No	How the author used it?
Claim – States the main   point or stance	Yes	The text has informed me about what can people do to give a second chance to rescued animals.
Big Names –  Mentions experts and important people to support the argument	No
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or   facts to support the argument	Yes	It says that adopting a pet is a good thing for the everyone because people have helped animals to start again. This would affect your friends because they will think you did the right thing.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions	Yes	The author has written about cats and dogs being abandoned and left them. This could kill the animals and that would be the end of their life. This will affect people because they will think that “What kind of a person would do that?”
Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility	Yes	Adopting a pet will probably be that best thing that you will do ever in your life. Doing this shows your kindness and credibility.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency   for the cause	Yes	If people keep abandoning or abusing animals or pets this and greatly lower the population of house animals. We can help to stop this by helping and animals who are in danger and giving them to the vet.
Research – Uses studies and   information to make the   argument seem more convincing;   this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations		The author has his/her opinion but no research to backup this text.

No More Homework!

Homework Should Be Banned In School

Claim – States the main   point or stance	Yes	The author has stated their view informing the audience about what they believe and what they are going to try and influence me about. The main point being: Homework for little kids should be banned!’
Big Names –  Mentions experts and important people to support the argument	No
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or   facts to support the argument	Yes	The author wrote “Homework is dreadfully unhealthy” because kids will have to do homework instead of taking a break.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions	Yes	In the text it shows that “Thinking of homework causes stress for kids and for parents”, and if kids ask for help from their parents, they might be tired was well. Also their minds will not have much knowledge to answer correctly.
Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility	Yes	The author said that “Teachers will not get enough rest because they will think about printing homework, handing them out and other things to take care of”. So that means teachers will have to handle too much things and come home late.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency   for the cause	Yes	The text says “Kids get to much work in school and they get more after”. That means that kids might now do homework because their very tired from all the hard work in school.
Research – Uses studies and   information to make the   argument seem more convincing;   this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations	Yes	The writer wrote how it feels, how hard it is, to the school about homework.

Plastic Bags Are A Threat!

Plastic Bags

Claim – States the main   point or stance	Yes	The author has written to me about plastic bags about who and what’s happening around the world. His persuasion techniques begin with stating that: ‘Plastics bags destroy the environment, and we can help by picking up rubbish on the ground’.
Big Names –  Mentions experts and important people to support the argument	No
Logos – Uses logic, numbers, or   facts to support the argument	Yes	While the writer states that plastic bags are   “harmful to the environment and wildlife,” he also includes facts that show examples of that harm including. In the text it shows that plastic bags do not rot or disintegrate and create pollution to the air and the sea. This would affect the land and the animals that feed on.
Pathos – Appeals to the audience’s emotions	Yes	In the writing it said that “Cleaners pick up more than 6 billion bags a year so that cleaners would have to work for a long time just to clear the city or streets. That would affect families because they won’t have enough time together.
Ethos – Tries to build trust and credibility	Yes	The author uses the fact that he/she has written about experts in Australia needing to clean up to six billion plastic bags are year.  He does this to let the reader know about his/her credibity.
Kairos – Builds a sense of urgency   for the cause	Yes	If workers in stores keep giving people plastic bags the population of plastic bags will rise and the pollution of the air, water and land will get worst. This will affect the environment and wildlife.
Research – Uses studies and   information to make the   argument seem more convincing;   this can be in the form of words, graphs, tables, or illustrations	NO	The writer has his/her opinion but now backup research.

Lets Put Fish & Chips On The Menu Today!

WALHT use pathos,ethos and logos to persuade people

FISH & CHIPS

Fish and chips are exquisite and irresistible. They are a very scrumptious fast food meal because they’re hot, and they've got flavour and at our school they are way cheaper than any food that you can order. Also the good thing is that there are various options to select from on the fish and chips menu.

Fish and chips are delicious and will make your stomach packed. By the smell and look of it, it will draw you to eat it. Unlike sushi, which costs five dollars for any combination,  fish and chips it is cheaper by miles. If you're cold, have some chips today because it’s hot and will make you warm. Eating chips is like a one bite from heaven.

An abundance of people think fish and chips are unacceptable for you because  they consider that they are perhaps a little oily, but think again. The benefits of chips are great because they are made from potatoes and medical research from the South American Medical Explores emphasizes the fact that potatoes can fight off cancer, clear diseases and make your bones stronger. Fish will have a benefit of keeping cells happy and strong and our heart and brain going on due to the fact that fish is loaded with omega. If instead of chips you chose hash browns, that’s still good for your health because like chips they are also made from potatoes which are a carbohydrate.

You can buy it any time you want, dinner,breakfast and lunch. Anytime is Fish & Chips time.

Adding Fish and Chips to our regular menu choice on Friday’s would most definitely be popular.